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Stories / welcome-to-the-machine-ch01 · 5 versions
Withdrawn from the site on 2026-10-19 01:04; this record stays public.
- Version 12026-10-15 22:50
first version - Version 22026-10-15 23:21
craft - Version 32026-10-16 15:11
ai-tell, craft, editorial, fact, world - Version 42026-10-16 16:46
ai-tell, clarity, craft, fact, voice, world - Version 52026-10-17 12:38
ai-tell, clarity, editorial, texture, world
Types of change, all versions
5 versions. 4 with recorded reasons (48 changes), 0 with rationale unrecorded.
world12world-embeddedness
ai-tell9removal of AI-sounding phrasing
clarity8a reference the reader could not follow without having lived the scene; under-explained (proposed by P2 on 2026-10-12, kept by Ralph as a separate tag from craft)
fact6a factual or lore error corrected (added 2026-10-12, agreed by Ralph)
craft5formatting / readability fixes
voice4character-voice maturity
editorial3editorialisation / banned-phrase removal
texture1sensory / textural depth
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