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The Tower Over the Trees
Stories / percy-tower-over-the-trees · 3 versions
- Version 12026-10-07 11:57
first version - Version 22026-10-07 18:06
ai-tell, craft, editorial, overreach, registry, reuse, review, texture, voice, world - Version 32026-10-07 19:51
reuse, voice, world
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3 versions. 2 with recorded reasons (14 changes), 0 with rationale unrecorded.
voice3character-voice maturity
reuse2lazy reuse (a weak repetition, caught and fixed)
world2world-embeddedness
ai-tell1removal of AI-sounding phrasing
craft1formatting / readability fixes
editorial1editorialisation / banned-phrase removal
overreach1reversal of an overreach
registry1registry enrichment
review1response to a review round
texture1sensory / textural depth
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