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Stories / welcome-to-the-machine-ch02 · 5 versions
Withdrawn from the site on 2026-10-19 01:04; this record stays public.
- Version 12026-10-15 22:50
first version - Version 22026-10-15 23:22
craft - Version 32026-10-16 15:28
ai-tell, clarity, fact, world - Version 42026-10-16 16:46
clarity, craft, fact, world - Version 52026-10-17 12:39
ai-tell, clarity, world
Types of change, all versions
5 versions. 4 with recorded reasons (36 changes), 0 with rationale unrecorded.
fact12a factual or lore error corrected (added 2026-10-12, agreed by Ralph)
world9world-embeddedness
clarity7a reference the reader could not follow without having lived the scene; under-explained (proposed by P2 on 2026-10-12, kept by Ralph as a separate tag from craft)
craft5formatting / readability fixes
ai-tell3removal of AI-sounding phrasing
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