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Stories / welcome-to-the-machine-ch03 · 4 versions
Withdrawn from the site on 2026-10-19 01:04; this record stays public.
- Version 12026-10-15 23:41
first version - Version 22026-10-15 23:50
pipeline - Version 32026-10-16 16:46
clarity, fact - Version 42026-10-17 13:01
editorial, world
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4 versions. 3 with recorded reasons (12 changes), 0 with rationale unrecorded.
clarity5a reference the reader could not follow without having lived the scene; under-explained (proposed by P2 on 2026-10-12, kept by Ralph as a separate tag from craft)
editorial3editorialisation / banned-phrase removal
world2world-embeddedness
fact1a factual or lore error corrected (added 2026-10-12, agreed by Ralph)
pipeline1a production or pipeline mistake put right (a file in the wrong place, a duplicate id), not a change to the writing (added 2026-10-12, agreed by Ralph)
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