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Still in Pyrewood
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4 marked passages in the text, none with a recorded reason.
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What changed and why
Rationale unrecorded.
unlisted v2-u1 jump to the passage ↓
Rationale unrecorded.
was: I had an errand elsewhere. I went the other way.
now: Nothing in this picture has anywhere further to be. I had not yet noticed I agreed with it.
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Rationale unrecorded.
was: honest
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was: "You have no standing order here," [think=mezzlos]Mezzlos
now: You have no standing order here. Mezzlos
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Rationale unrecorded.
was: honest
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Still in Pyrewood
I had an errand elsewhere. I went the other way.Nothing in this picture has anywhere further to be. I had not yet noticed I agreed with it. [Picture description: A misty dawn view of Pyrewood Village below Shadowfang Keep, pines lit gold from behind, a cart standing empty in the foreground]
I had an errand elsewhere. I went the other way.
Nothing in this picture has anywhere further to be. I had not yet noticed I agreed with it.
I can give no honest account of why Pyrewood Village drew me, only the plain fact that it did. I had a perfectly serviceable errand waiting elsewhere in Silverpine Forest, and I walked toward the village instead, the way a tongue goes to a broken tooth.
honest
When Dalaran burned, Arugal fled south to the keep above a logging town and called worgen out of the Emerald Dream to hold a line against the Scourge. The worgen did not hold it. They turned first on the mages who had summoned them, then on the town below, and the curse meant for an enemy settled instead over Pyrewood’s own people — a thing they now carry, rather than a thing that was done to them once and finished.
Whatever waited there, I did not go alone. Two others of our own kind had fallen in with me by the second gate, and neither waited to be asked. One never let a hex finish landing before closing the distance himself, as though patience were a tax he resented paying twice. The other was dead before I was and halfway back to fetch me before my own soul had properly left my body — a service I had not requested and have not yet found the correct tone in which to decline.
There is a particular comedy, I am told, in pulling one cursed villager cleanly from a crowd and watching it bolt rather than fight. I counted it a mercy and said so. It returned a minute later with the better part of its household.
It was not the mob that undid me, in the end. It was a tailor. A tailor, formerly of this village, now in service to a dead worgen lord, put a knife between my ribs from an angle a tradesman has no business knowing, and I went down to a backstab delivered by a man who, in life, hemmed trousers. I have killed captains. I have been finished, on this one evening, by a tailor’s knife and an elder’s temper and a watch of three that came at me together, and I confess the tailor is the one I resent. The others at least had the decency to be soldiers about it.
The log read one of six. I had not yet decided to mind. [Picture description: Percy standing before Son of Arugal on a cracked stone road, the quest log open at one of six shackles recovered]
“You have no standing order here,” [think=mezzlos]MezzlosYou have no standing order here. Mezzlos told me, flatly, somewhere past the second death. He was not wrong, and he did not mean it as a kindness, and I did not take it as one. A warlock’s familiar keeps a ledger of what is owed him; he does not keep one of what a man owes himself, and has no opinion on why a dead thing with its errand finished would choose to keep dying in the same wood for no order anyone had given it.
"You have no standing order here," [think=mezzlos]Mezzlos
You have no standing order here. Mezzlos
The sixth shackle came in late, past the hour I had any further business in Pyrewood. I did not leave. My companions did not ask me to stay, which is, I have come to notice, rather more persuasive than if they had.
I have entered one figure in the book tonight, and underlined it, in the place where I usually put the thing that mattered: the cost of having my armour repaired, twice over, by a smith who did not ask why a dead man’s plate kept arriving in pieces. It is the only honest accounting I have of the evening. The rest I am leaving where it sits, unexplained, the way a man leaves a tooth once it has stopped aching — grateful for the quiet, and faintly suspicious of it.
honest
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